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This is a loop, and the combat isn't very well made. Please, do improve on this.

MadnessWolf responds:

Ok,i will try

Not bad. Not bad at all.

A true masterpiece. Unbelievable how over a year of work can create such wonders. Well made, and this has the most touching story that I have ever seen since the tale of sir Lancelot.

And here I was, prepared to accept every single lie that Sean Murry told us. I didn't expect a lot of things from him, and having a multiplayer game in such a large scale is literally impossible with the technology we have today. It's too unstable, but because the game is in singleplayer and it's never going to have multiplayer, means that it is slightly more stable for the best systems available today. But if it has multiplayer, than this game will not work altogether. It will just be a waste of money.

Also, this animation will truly represent the truth when multiplayer exists, unless Sean decided that they should ensure the security of other player's ships are only for the player that owns the ship. But, apparently, this will be relatable to anyone. Well done!

Damn, this is good! I really liked how you animated this! If this was in a museum, it would be called art! Good work!!!!! EXCELLENT!!FDSEDASDBGgHGDFRFCbhFDasFWEDC

Keek responds:

Thanks man! Means a lot!

Not too bad, I gotta say. It's rather well made for a 15 second flash animation, and I reckon that you can do a lot better. Even though it could use some polishing, it is pretty much acceptable. Good luck in the future! :)

Dreamimate responds:

lol i was too lazy to polish it. I did want to add another titan into but was too lazy. I'm not good at drawing yet. Thanks for you comment

You got a lot of polishing to do. The animation doesn't really seem too smooth, and the 3 dimension perspective is actually not too great either. A lot of improvement and a ton of grammar errors. No need to be a Grammar Nazi here.
Good news is, that it does have some potential coming with it. But, I suggest that you try to check the animation a couple of times before submitting something like this.Sure, it's bad, but hey, it has potential. Practice a bit with your Flash animation tools, and try to submit the best that you have seen so far from your animations, and then, submit. You might be rated better, and perhaps you can get quite good rates on this one.

If at first you don't succeed, try, try again. And maybe grab a Starbucks while you are at it, if you like the sweet coffee.

Very well made, as if it really was a madness movie. However, I think the delay in attacks are just too long. They think more about when and where to stab first, instead of going for it.

A very beautiful, simple style. I like it. Really, I do. Keep it up!

This movie really creeps me out sometimes. but it is a familiar concept that I like. Interesting story line, easy to follow, and I like the way it has been presented. If it was too creepy, it might just be my gut feeling, because something is always unfamiliar to people, especially some of the more disturbing scenes. I suppose it isn't your fault, but it would be mine for not expecting the unexpected. Anyhow, this is an interesting concept. Suprising, but amazing. Well done!

Nothing much about me, just your regular game playing person. "We're all shooting stars. We fall down at some point, and when you make a wish, it comes true. We also shine extraordinarily bright, especially to our strengths." - Lathryn,

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