Lathryn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Speedpaint] Swayed]

I must say, yu draw extremely well. Unlike me, you do know what you are doing. I'm just unable to make wonders like you do, but I believe with more practice, comes perfection. So yeah, I really like the way you drew this! Keep it up!

Oddlem responds:

I'm extremely honored that you think that, thank you! ;-; I actually have no idea what I'm doing when I draw though- I just kind of experiment a bit along the way with some (a lot) of trial and error. lol

[Eddsworld - Is this Pepsi [Fan Animation]]

It has some good animation, but the voice acting is rather worthless.

[Madness in Russia Ep.2]

This is a lot better, but the intro is just too long. Please, you must re-check the agility of the animation. Oh, and madness combat is all about the fast-paced shooting, and deaths, not short conversations. Please, improve on these two parts. Also, one final thing. Include more scenes and places than just one entire area.

MadnessWolf responds:

Ok,ok. I can try better. Really

[Bloodracuted]

It does have an ineteresting concept but... What the hell is this? I don't know what to say about this, but... Uh... It's not too good.

LukeOllyOxen responds:

I kinda was going 4 metalocapse

[The King's Birthday]

Now this is one of the few animations that I do tend to enjoy. well made, family friendly, I gotta say, you did really well on this one!

[The Librarian: Director's Cut]

I dare say, I am impressed by such talents. What bugs me a bit is the sounds that were used in.. Unity, I think? It kinda makes the animation sound more boring than it should. In a good horror animation, like this one for example, the sounds, ambiance and atmosphere play a big role in this jam. But anyway, the colors and choreography is very fascinating. Just the sound needs a bit of improvement. Good luck in further animations and jams.

[Tell Me A Story...]

Whoa... Whoa. That's just, unbelievable. This story truly is something to admire on. I really hope this one gets out alright, because a story like that should be shown to newgrounds. However, at the end, it is supposed to be "If only she have kept going" or "If only she kept going" (No grammar nazi intended).
Characters are just miraclous, and you should keep this up on future projects. Good luck!

Mrevilcookiez responds:

Thank you so much!!!

[Orange Combat: White Demon Combat]

Okay, okay. Listen up. You got the blood effects just nicely, but it still is somewhat of a boring clone of the Madness Combat series, even when it is your own version of it. But please, the fighting in this game is just.... Eh. Please improve, I do know you can do a lot better.

[The Water Elemental Battle]

Promising thumbnail, but it really showed me something that doesn't suffice most expectations. Combat in this animation is just too boring, and it needs a little bit more spice. And what's with the water elemental suddenly dying and turning into something darker? Terrible arrangement.

hanzo1 responds:

Hello Lathryn thank you for the comment, But this did not start off as such a big animation project. It was only going to be a test of the transformation of the water elemental to water. That is why she starts in the air. I'm going back to add a scene before this and after it. maybe that will fix some things. Finally the water elemental is not dead she passes out she was possessed by the dark elemental.
I thank you again for the comment and this was my first battle animation :D

[Tale of Two Tasters]

It ain't bad, and it ain't good either. All I can say it's so-so. Nice try, though.