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Lathryn

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I like the way you mad this... Beast, fiendish thing. It really looks great! An incredible display!

It has some decent animation, but what is with the white borders and that red rectangle there. Also, it doesn't feel like a complete loop. Please improve a slight bit.

It has some really good animations in it! But, tell me. How old were you at that time? It is not everyday that I get to see creative kids around here.

TheAnimatedDrawings responds:

At the time I was an early 13 Now I'm nearing 14.

A ton of humour, a happy feeling, and creatively scary. Excellent!

The animation is alright, I guess. Even with the sound missing, it still is a pretty good looking animation preview.

This has some really good animation, and the sounds are just pretty good. Also, thanks for the seizure warning :D

JarrodElvin responds:

Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Wow, Gumbino. That was extremely well animated. *Clap clap clap* Keep this up!!!

storytellerYT responds:

thanks man, I do it for you guys

I have to say, you improved a lot on this one. It feels really smooth now, and like the protagonist suggested, the combat was very easy. Maybe a bit too easy. Try to make sure that the combat for the protagonist to be slightly harder. Also, the music tends to overlap a bit. Try to fix on that.

MadnessWolf responds:

I know , at the moment I can not fix (

Well, this is really impressive. I don't know how you can make things like this, but yeah... All I can say is that it isn't perfect, but it isn't too bad. Also, love the jazz playing in the background :)

AnimatedCritic responds:

Thank you - your review is very much appreciated.

I have ideas for making it "perfecter" some day, but honestly I've moved on and doubt I ever will. More likely I would do something similar, but longer and better.. I had the idea of doing "Jazztasia" to pieces like "Bitches Brew," but that would be a long, long ways off...

The sounds are actually kinda off, especially the voice actor, but I do find it very poetic. Amazing creation, good animation, but.. I'm just missing the sound effects. And the voice. Do some improvements on that.

Broltaire responds:

Thanks for the critique. Sounds were definitely rushed due to time on my end, so they unfortunately took a quality hit. I did the voice work myself, its something I don't do often but want to try and improve at. But I do appreciate the feedback, helps me know where to look to improve.

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