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Lathryn

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Whoa, man. It's been a little while since I've seen a pretty good stick animation. Most use stick animations as learning material and basics on animations to see how it all works out, but you did quite alright.

Animation was good, the music could have been better, the effects seemed a bit too funky, but it was okay. However, the thing that bummed me out is the whole MLG finish that yellow does. Still, good effort.

MassiveMarioLuigi700 responds:

yeah i could of done the mlg a bit better, and i was going to use original audio that i have made for the past few months or weeks, and i was such in a rush to see my finished animation that i have to cut most of the planned ideas i had in mind for the mlg since, the yellow stick figure was going to used the blunt as a sword and combo the green stick figure of stage and that would be the end of the animation.

And also why the effects looks kind of wonky is because its a parody of smash brother and i try to kind of wanna make the hit effect and everything else look kid friendly like in the first 2 games. But yeah there you go. I responded to your feedback.

I can't ever say that I hate this one. It feels just like Cyanide and Happiness, it has a very regular beginning, but a very unexpected ending. But, then again, this is your version, and not a Cyanide and Happiness. Still, you couldn't help but make me smile at how the ending went. And so, I quote: "Good weed? GOOD WEED?! THIS IS RUBBISH WEED!!"

Animation was also pretty well, and it has a nice simple feeling to it. Voice acting is also great and well done, and the details of the father really makes it feel like he's a father, alright. Keep up the good work!

LOTAC responds:

Cheers dude! Very much appreciated. You know? I don't check out Cyanide & Happiness that much. I see some comics on Facebook they do from time to time but never actually seeked it out or watched any of the animations. I might have to give em' a look. Thanks for the kind words and the recommendation

Sweet goodness! What was I watching?! A chicken pig took a dump, it sucked it back in, a baguette then started to have sexual intercourse with it (or, anything that looks like it), and then some monster ate it out of nowhere... It's... It's... Incredible.

Animation is done well, the small details are alright, background is also okay, but... Hm... Don't you think you have to move this one up to mature? Because, from the way I'm seeing it, it ain't exactly everyone material, man.

Hallucinogen-related responds:

Will do it now. Im new to this and all. But thank you for the feedback

It's not too bad, the artstyle can use a bit of lightening, maybe make it a bit more clean, but I love how the story is. Barber 1 is always distracted, barber 2 is just plain old weird, and barber 3... Just like Barber 1, but is probably more popular than barber 1. Also, I feel like the background's missing a bit. Like, when barber 2 was telling his story, your character felt way too static. It's a bit more work to get your character moving or have a bit more reaction, but otherwise, I don't really see much else to improve on, and you're doing quite alright!

You guys really knocked it out of the park for this one. It has excellent suspense, some of the best character design I've ever seen in an animation, and it doesn't really have to tell you directly what the story of these two children are. I'm super glad I managed to stumble onto this one on the Newgrounds Portal, and to come this early... Just amazing. I can guarantee this one will be on the frontpage for excellence!

I like it! You've done a great job on this one, animation is finely done, the cartoon artstyle is very familiar to my days watching Cartoon Network. Well done!

Another great piece of work from Memo2007. Love the transitions, the background animations... In fact, this is really good! Well, save from one thing: sometimes, it's unclear what the vocaloids are saying. But, other than that slight improvement, you did an awesome job! Keep it up!

Memo2007 responds:

Thanks for your respond, we will try improve the quality as we can.

Great... You made me sad now. But in a good way! Fantastic work!

AguRex responds:

Thank you.
Hope it had a positive impact

Yeah... I don't see a lot of things here that actually can make me smile here. Animation is badly done, it's just picture after picture for a few seconds. Artstyle, not too great either, and the music isn't too satisfying, and that made with VideoShow brand, I can't unsee this... Sorry, but, you still got a ton to improve on, and this one could use a bit of a polish.

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