Lathryn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[An Experiment in Transformation]

Well, this is really impressive. I don't know how you can make things like this, but yeah... All I can say is that it isn't perfect, but it isn't too bad. Also, love the jazz playing in the background :)

AnimatedCritic responds:

Thank you - your review is very much appreciated.

I have ideas for making it "perfecter" some day, but honestly I've moved on and doubt I ever will. More likely I would do something similar, but longer and better.. I had the idea of doing "Jazztasia" to pieces like "Bitches Brew," but that would be a long, long ways off...

[Don't Turn on the Lights]

The sounds are actually kinda off, especially the voice actor, but I do find it very poetic. Amazing creation, good animation, but.. I'm just missing the sound effects. And the voice. Do some improvements on that.

Broltaire responds:

Thanks for the critique. Sounds were definitely rushed due to time on my end, so they unfortunately took a quality hit. I did the voice work myself, its something I don't do often but want to try and improve at. But I do appreciate the feedback, helps me know where to look to improve.

[[Speedpaint] Swayed]

I must say, yu draw extremely well. Unlike me, you do know what you are doing. I'm just unable to make wonders like you do, but I believe with more practice, comes perfection. So yeah, I really like the way you drew this! Keep it up!

Oddlem responds:

I'm extremely honored that you think that, thank you! ;-; I actually have no idea what I'm doing when I draw though- I just kind of experiment a bit along the way with some (a lot) of trial and error. lol

[Madness in Russia Ep.2]

This is a lot better, but the intro is just too long. Please, you must re-check the agility of the animation. Oh, and madness combat is all about the fast-paced shooting, and deaths, not short conversations. Please, improve on these two parts. Also, one final thing. Include more scenes and places than just one entire area.

MadnessWolf responds:

Ok,ok. I can try better. Really

[Bloodracuted]

It does have an ineteresting concept but... What the hell is this? I don't know what to say about this, but... Uh... It's not too good.

LukeOllyOxen responds:

I kinda was going 4 metalocapse

[Tell Me A Story...]

Whoa... Whoa. That's just, unbelievable. This story truly is something to admire on. I really hope this one gets out alright, because a story like that should be shown to newgrounds. However, at the end, it is supposed to be "If only she have kept going" or "If only she kept going" (No grammar nazi intended).
Characters are just miraclous, and you should keep this up on future projects. Good luck!

Mrevilcookiez responds:

Thank you so much!!!

[The Water Elemental Battle]

Promising thumbnail, but it really showed me something that doesn't suffice most expectations. Combat in this animation is just too boring, and it needs a little bit more spice. And what's with the water elemental suddenly dying and turning into something darker? Terrible arrangement.

hanzo1 responds:

Hello Lathryn thank you for the comment, But this did not start off as such a big animation project. It was only going to be a test of the transformation of the water elemental to water. That is why she starts in the air. I'm going back to add a scene before this and after it. maybe that will fix some things. Finally the water elemental is not dead she passes out she was possessed by the dark elemental.
I thank you again for the comment and this was my first battle animation :D

[Madness in Russia]

This is a loop, and the combat isn't very well made. Please, do improve on this.

MadnessWolf responds:

Ok,i will try

[The Binding Of Jumcum]

Damn, this is good! I really liked how you animated this! If this was in a museum, it would be called art! Good work!!!!! EXCELLENT!!FDSEDASDBGgHGDFRFCbhFDasFWEDC

Keek responds:

Thanks man! Means a lot!

[A TACK On Titan]

Not too bad, I gotta say. It's rather well made for a 15 second flash animation, and I reckon that you can do a lot better. Even though it could use some polishing, it is pretty much acceptable. Good luck in the future! :)

Dreamimate responds:

lol i was too lazy to polish it. I did want to add another titan into but was too lazy. I'm not good at drawing yet. Thanks for you comment