Lathryn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Don't Turn on the Lights]

The sounds are actually kinda off, especially the voice actor, but I do find it very poetic. Amazing creation, good animation, but.. I'm just missing the sound effects. And the voice. Do some improvements on that.

Broltaire responds:

Thanks for the critique. Sounds were definitely rushed due to time on my end, so they unfortunately took a quality hit. I did the voice work myself, its something I don't do often but want to try and improve at. But I do appreciate the feedback, helps me know where to look to improve.

[Bloodracuted]

It does have an ineteresting concept but... What the hell is this? I don't know what to say about this, but... Uh... It's not too good.

LukeOllyOxen responds:

I kinda was going 4 metalocapse

[The Water Elemental Battle]

Promising thumbnail, but it really showed me something that doesn't suffice most expectations. Combat in this animation is just too boring, and it needs a little bit more spice. And what's with the water elemental suddenly dying and turning into something darker? Terrible arrangement.

hanzo1 responds:

Hello Lathryn thank you for the comment, But this did not start off as such a big animation project. It was only going to be a test of the transformation of the water elemental to water. That is why she starts in the air. I'm going back to add a scene before this and after it. maybe that will fix some things. Finally the water elemental is not dead she passes out she was possessed by the dark elemental.
I thank you again for the comment and this was my first battle animation :D

[The Binding Of Jumcum]

Damn, this is good! I really liked how you animated this! If this was in a museum, it would be called art! Good work!!!!! EXCELLENT!!FDSEDASDBGgHGDFRFCbhFDasFWEDC

Keek responds:

Thanks man! Means a lot!

[A TACK On Titan]

Not too bad, I gotta say. It's rather well made for a 15 second flash animation, and I reckon that you can do a lot better. Even though it could use some polishing, it is pretty much acceptable. Good luck in the future! :)

Dreamimate responds:

lol i was too lazy to polish it. I did want to add another titan into but was too lazy. I'm not good at drawing yet. Thanks for you comment