Lathryn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Let's Tube Together!]

It's something I can't complain about. It's nicely done, good colors, beautiful graphics, and it's just the kind of humor you'd ned in Newgrounds. The animation is also great, because you just gotta look at that finger poking that one guy, and you'll immediately say: "GREAT SCOTT! WHY IS THIS GUY NOT FAMOUS YET?" Eh, I don't know. I just, um... Hate the thumbnail. A bit.

STOOVRS responds:

thanks i made the thumbnail after studying everything that was wrong with youtube
okay fine i'll fix it
alright i fixed it maybe i don't know
it's just a screenshot but i kinda like it maybe

[Hyper Light Drifter Fan Animation]

I find it pretty odd, except for the artstyle. If you look to it a bit more clearly, some parts feel more like animation gifs that was pasted in there. Also, that long intro with all the credits is best suggested to leave in the last few seconds of the animation. This might already bore the audience that are viewing the animation. So, let me recap: Good artstyle, a few parts are like animation gifs that loop about, and the long intro kind of deters people. Still, decently done.

RosesynHJ responds:

Thank you for the feedback! :)
As it is probably one of my first more finalized animation works, as generally I don't do much animation, I did use repeated frames quite a bit.
I didn't choose my music before doing the animation and had trouble shortening it down, so i had a bunch of space at the start with no animation, which is why i chose to make it how i did. But i realize now some ways I could have fixed or gone about this better. I do agree with you now that I think about it that it's probably better to have at the end.

Thanks!

[Madness Ogrebation]

You're doing a great job, friend. Your animation is going mighty well, it's fast-paced (Exactly how a Madness animation is supposed to be), and the sound effects are also pretty alright. However, around 0:10, when it's scrolling up the stairs, the guard appears to be very static, and in a few milliseconds, he seemed to finally get an animation. I know this is a little bit too much for you as of now, but perhaps for future events, try to keep everything animated, even guards that are off-screen. Also, you could have added a bit more idle animations to the guards that were in the second room. Or, perhaps, they're trying to prepare a bit more for their upcoming opponent, which is this animations protagonist. Lastly, think of perhaps more effects for the magic that the protagonist is using. Maybe, make his hand glow a bit, or add additional magical particles. But, still, you did an amazing job!

(Hope to see you on this year's Madness Day! I foresee another great celebration with people like you around!)

MadnessWolf responds:

Yeah,i'm making animation for MD. Thx for ur comment!

[Super Smash Bros 4 duel crusade2]

Whoa, man. It's been a little while since I've seen a pretty good stick animation. Most use stick animations as learning material and basics on animations to see how it all works out, but you did quite alright.

Animation was good, the music could have been better, the effects seemed a bit too funky, but it was okay. However, the thing that bummed me out is the whole MLG finish that yellow does. Still, good effort.

MassiveMarioLuigi700 responds:

yeah i could of done the mlg a bit better, and i was going to use original audio that i have made for the past few months or weeks, and i was such in a rush to see my finished animation that i have to cut most of the planned ideas i had in mind for the mlg since, the yellow stick figure was going to used the blunt as a sword and combo the green stick figure of stage and that would be the end of the animation.

And also why the effects looks kind of wonky is because its a parody of smash brother and i try to kind of wanna make the hit effect and everything else look kid friendly like in the first 2 games. But yeah there you go. I responded to your feedback.

[Getting Caught With Rego - Grounded]

I can't ever say that I hate this one. It feels just like Cyanide and Happiness, it has a very regular beginning, but a very unexpected ending. But, then again, this is your version, and not a Cyanide and Happiness. Still, you couldn't help but make me smile at how the ending went. And so, I quote: "Good weed? GOOD WEED?! THIS IS RUBBISH WEED!!"

Animation was also pretty well, and it has a nice simple feeling to it. Voice acting is also great and well done, and the details of the father really makes it feel like he's a father, alright. Keep up the good work!

LOTAC responds:

Cheers dude! Very much appreciated. You know? I don't check out Cyanide & Happiness that much. I see some comics on Facebook they do from time to time but never actually seeked it out or watched any of the animations. I might have to give em' a look. Thanks for the kind words and the recommendation

[The Story Of ChickenPig]

Sweet goodness! What was I watching?! A chicken pig took a dump, it sucked it back in, a baguette then started to have sexual intercourse with it (or, anything that looks like it), and then some monster ate it out of nowhere... It's... It's... Incredible.

Animation is done well, the small details are alright, background is also okay, but... Hm... Don't you think you have to move this one up to mature? Because, from the way I'm seeing it, it ain't exactly everyone material, man.

Hallucinogen-related responds:

Will do it now. Im new to this and all. But thank you for the feedback

[[Kagamine Len & Kagamine Rin] The Music House [Memo2007Ultra-MusicStudio2016-Vocaloid2016]]

Another great piece of work from Memo2007. Love the transitions, the background animations... In fact, this is really good! Well, save from one thing: sometimes, it's unclear what the vocaloids are saying. But, other than that slight improvement, you did an awesome job! Keep it up!

Memo2007 responds:

Thanks for your respond, we will try improve the quality as we can.

[Love]

Great... You made me sad now. But in a good way! Fantastic work!

AguRex responds:

Thank you.
Hope it had a positive impact

[Lost Episode: Spongebob's Bad Day (Teaser Trailer)]

I like the general suspense to this, but you didn't give me much to talk about here, because this is just a teaser. However, I have high hopes on the real animation, and I'll be looking forward to it.

FishyLemon878 responds:

I will make Animation's as well, but I'm going to use Clip Studio Paint for animating the lost episode

[John Visits Chinatown]

And the queen will hear about this animation, and she will attack it with her supernatural flying chimps that breath fire!! Okay, let's be real here for a second. The animation is poor, the voices, oh the voices... It's not really too good. Even the art made me lose it a bit. It's not too good, but you got a bit of potential on this one. I know you'll do better than this, just improve from this one, and spend a bit more time on this.

lucasadilla responds:

Thanks for the feedback! To be fair this animation (if I can even call it that) was meant as a joke.