Voices are rather delayed, in most parts of the animation. Although it runs smoothly, the sounds are delayed, so improve on that
Voices are rather delayed, in most parts of the animation. Although it runs smoothly, the sounds are delayed, so improve on that
I agree, the next animation is much better with that... thanks!
The animation here is extremely impressive. The graphics are poor and painted to some people, sure, but it's extremely good to look at! Also, it is somewhat hilarious to see that they both actually have different dreams, and the female character misunderstands the male character at some point. However, you can never get the perfect animation with just a few frames. Perfection is but an opinion, in most cases. Like I said before, the graphics are rather painted, which most will like, but some would prefer smooth. But, that is just anyones opinion. Still, this is absolute excellence! Well done!!
Thank you very much! It was pretty much my first time doing it, which took two months to make but it was for my friend's anniversary with his boyfriend.
I do like the animation, and this could be considered to be one of the better stick animations in Newgrounds, but the combat, sounds and fighting is so anticlamactic! So, first off, the divine boss music just cuts off once every while, and one of the characters died, but then went back to life? This just doesn't make any sense. Some parts of the combat is quite alright, and some sounds feel kind of stock instead of some realistic sounds. Here is my recommendation: Try your luck at Hyunsdojo.com, for that is the main stickman animation website, and newgrounds is more of a... Different kind of flash place, even though stickman animations are always welcome, but overall, it is well made.
Wow I kind of feel like your insulting my work when you say "different kind of flash place". I thought all were welcomed here but here you are telling me go try some other place. Other than that, thanks for the feedback......
The animation is quite smooth, but some sounds occur too early. Please improve on that part.
Thanks for the critique
Combat and animation is pretty impressive, and choreography was on point. Extremely amazing work. Only, one problem. Who's who?
Lol, I appreciated and Beerus is the cat looking guy and Darkseid is the other guy.
It has some really good animations in it! But, tell me. How old were you at that time? It is not everyday that I get to see creative kids around here.
At the time I was an early 13 Now I'm nearing 14.
This has some really good animation, and the sounds are just pretty good. Also, thanks for the seizure warning :D
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Wow, Gumbino. That was extremely well animated. *Clap clap clap* Keep this up!!!
thanks man, I do it for you guys
Well, this is really impressive. I don't know how you can make things like this, but yeah... All I can say is that it isn't perfect, but it isn't too bad. Also, love the jazz playing in the background :)
Thank you - your review is very much appreciated.
I have ideas for making it "perfecter" some day, but honestly I've moved on and doubt I ever will. More likely I would do something similar, but longer and better.. I had the idea of doing "Jazztasia" to pieces like "Bitches Brew," but that would be a long, long ways off...
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